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T O P I C R E V I E WSunChildI've just been in a place of peace this afternoon, and wrote this ~ without thought , just wanted to see what was going to come out. Man's heart creates the song of Edenthe mind is fractured,capturedby the taste of onesown ideaof perfectionwork as One wholerespecting the tendrils of uniquenessshaping the wayfor the hearts journeyblessed be the onewho listens to the musicwithout thoughtto feel and not thinkgives the heart a voiceMaybe I'll get better at it as I age. lol ValusI love it. It's so beautiful.But my heartsong tells me,and I want to believe,that there is no antagonismbetween heart and mind.Both have their place,and cooperation is key.Or am I thinking too much?I really liked your poem. listenstotrees TBeautiful poem SunChild. I understand.SunChildEdited.. I did not know where I was going with this... I should not complicate my thoughts. listenstotreesI read your thoughts before you edited them and I think you had some good ones there. SunChildAwww BrokenWhat a beautiful poem. Just wanted to let you know you are a strong talent.
Man's heart creates the song of Edenthe mind is fractured,capturedby the taste of onesown ideaof perfection
work as One wholerespecting the tendrils of uniquenessshaping the wayfor the hearts journey
blessed be the onewho listens to the musicwithout thoughtto feel and not thinkgives the heart a voice
Maybe I'll get better at it as I age. lol
But my heartsong tells me,and I want to believe,that there is no antagonismbetween heart and mind.Both have their place,and cooperation is key.Or am I thinking too much?
I really liked your poem.
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